5 designs that are not as strong...

Here are five that I have chosen, to show you what I do not like...



This design looks like its trying too hard, and there are too many things all over the place. You just don't know what to look at.



This on the other hand, has a concept that is hard to grasp at. And its not too interesting to look at.




Design numero three... hmm. it's just all over the place. No focal point, and boring.















This is a very unique design. It a good try, but its trying too hard. Again, too many things all over the place. You want to give your attention to it, but you just give up.




And finally, this designs typography is scattered everywhere. Bunching them up in a corner, will not look too organized. It makes your piece look messy.